“My Broken-hearted Plans For Her” (Poetry)
Poem # 1
No bra, but her t-shirt makes an attempt
She’s showing and teasing, and I just wanna get her
Whatever she wants
~ Sakari
Poem # 2
Like so many from my way
I don’t know what love really is
They talk about it so much
But my love for anyone, is on life support
~ Sakari
Poem # 3
She’ll be so happy
With all the material things
I can’t wait to see her face light up
When I tell her, that I can buy her anything
~ Sakari
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“Like so many from my way
I don’t know what love really is
They talk about it so much
But my love for anyone, is on life support”
This feels like a deep reflection on emotional disconnect. You seem to be expressing a sense of disillusionment with love, how it’s often talked about or idealized, but it’s hard for you to grasp or believe in , its elusive, I get it. The phrase “on life support” really emphasizes how fragile or distant your connection to love feels, as if it’s struggling to survive. It suggests that while you might still have the capacity to love, something has drained or numbed that part of you. It’s honest, and there’s vulnerability in it, like you’re in a place of waiting or healing.
Nicely written! I hope to read more very soon WP friend.
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